start of the assignment

Ok guys i wanted to make a typographic version of the hammurabi code....i plan on keeping it very clean and neat, and tend to focus on making each paragraph perfect in kerning, leading, etc....i kno its gunna take forever but i want to master a perfect paragraph before i move on to the guerilla style of type (which also is a style typography i like) ......so let me kno what you think, its like 15% done....be honest and give me a crit........ the pic keeps getting cut off a lil short on the right side....

u can click the link here to see it full sized.....

http://img230.imageshack.us/my.php?image=hammurabi1et4.jpg